"So Jake, What is it like to have a family that excepts you?" Zack questioned.
"I'm an orphan." Jake replied.
Zack, Tommy, and Christine stared at each other in amazement. Then Zack sat back down in the chair with a glum look on his face. Tommy went near Zack and they stared at Jake. Jake was confused he didn't know why they were so sad. Then Christine told Jake about how they all were runaway orphans. Jake understood why they were upset and started to feel sad too.
"Sam you didn't tell us that he was an orphan like us," Zack
"Zack I'm sorry about not telling you guys, but I didn't know if he would want me to tell you." Sam said glumly.
"It doesn't bother me that I'm an Orphan because my parents explained why they gave me up." Jake said.
Suddenly they heard a crash out side and then the ground began to shake. They looked around and notice that there was a huge hole in the ground. As Zack turned around something landed on his head and he fell to the ground. No one saw what hit him but they felt the same pulse Jake felt Early.
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You've got a couple of errors, but the story is really good. You should keep writing this story. You could write chapters.
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