Jake is an orphan growing up in Austin, Texas. The story of why he's an orphan is unknown. from time to time he has moments were feels like he doesn't belong. Jake was different then most kids. He is able to lift any thing over 30 tons. So the next day at school Jake felt a pulse from nowhere. He looked out the window with fear. Then while he was staring out the window across the street he saw the impossible a girl on fire. so when he tried to rescue her. He realized that she wasn't on fire but that she also had special powers.
"Hey, you what are you doing!"said the girl frighteningly.
"I... I um... I was trying to help you until..."
"Until what"
"Until I notice you where like me,"
"what do you mean like you,"
Jake lifted the dumpster nearby completely over is head. The girl looked at him with amazement.
"that's hot"
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Hey, good start! I'll be happy to see the rest of it.
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I really like the start of this story. I think it introduces the main character and the plot of the story very well. I am looking foward to reading future parts of this story.
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